Do you ream the inside of the brass tube out?
I do on ALL my casted blanks to prevent PR seperation from happening.
Looks to be a bolt action pen. Those, in my opinion, are the tightest fitting componenets i've pressed together.
I ream the bolt tubes out using a 1/4'' dremel sanding drum in the drill press to the point i can almost hand press the nib and upper portion in leaving about a 1/16'' to press in. Just my experience and opinion
Harry