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This is my first pic with a light tent ...and a decent pen LOL

Critique (with instructions) please...DON'T BE BASHFULL!

Thanks,
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Pretty good. Little fuzzy on the nib. Next time, try not to let the stitching show on your background. For that matter a better background would be helpful. Over-all, very nice start. Good lighting, good color. Nice job.
 
A heck of a lot better than my photos. Just curious, what kind of light tent did you use and where did you get it? And that pen is awesome. I can't wait till I make a pen that looks that nice.
 
Basically what Steve said, I will add that the photo is slightly over-exposed, so either increase the shutter speed or open the aperture a bit, probably about 1/3 stop. The way you have the pen laid out is making it dificult for you to get the whole thing in focus. I don't know what kind of camera you have and you didn't give any details on the exposure. Did you use a tripod?
 
Hey Steve,

What would you recomend for a better background?

Originally posted by stevers

Pretty good. Little fuzzy on the nib. Next time, try not to let the stitching show on your background. For that matter a better background would be helpful. Over-all, very nice start. Good lighting, good color. Nice job.
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